I gave Jackie a composition assignment on "A Nightmare". She returned with a 2-page answer.
Mum: Jackie, your introduction is one page long, it is too long. And where are the good words you are supposed to use? I don't see any good words.
Jackie: Yes, I did use good words.
Mum: Really, where? Show me.
Jackie: Here...nightmare.
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